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Scorpio

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I walk outside with reverence
And breathe deeply,
Inhaling the scent of the countryside:
My second home.
The stars in the inky sky
Are veiled now and again
By the lazily drifting clouds.
The air is mild,
A slight breeze catches at my hair,
Tendrils of flame tickling my bare shoulders.
I breathe in again, scents and vivid images
Reaching out to the very edges of my soul,
Smoothing worn patches and frayed ends.
Scorpio appears in the sky
(How long have I been standing?)
Antares the red giant flickers tauntingly,
Reflected in emerald eyes misted with tears.
I had to re-write this piece because I wasn't happy with it. I changed a few of the lines around, shifted words and deleted some. Scorpio is my starsign and is visible at night in Melbourne at the moment.
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missalexis09's avatar
love it, scorpio as well
:optimism: